Emulating Alex Lifeson’s Rush guitar tone

Back in the day, I ran a series of Classic Chords for Lifeson, Hendrix, The Manics, Oasis, and many others. I attempted to emulate the various guitars of the artists highlighted so I could demo the chords more authentically. Anyway, with the advent of large language models, such as ChatGPT, there is now the option to utilise their training to find a better way to describe how to get a particular guitar tone.

I asked ChatGPT to explain how I could emulate the guitar tone Alex Lifeson uses on one of my favourite Rush song’s Freewill, from their 1980 album Permanent Waves. That was the first tour on which I saw the band live so it holds a special place for me.

Here’s the specific prompt I used to  get it to describe how I might emulate the tone:

You are to act as an expert in VST plugins for music mixing including Guitar Rig. Analyse the Rush song Freewill and tell me how to set up Guitar Rig to emulate the guitar tone used by the band’s guitarist Alex Lifeson in that song. You should provide all details in terms of amp model I should use, and the amp head, reverb, EQ, chorus, and any other effects.

This is what it came back with:

In “Freewill,” Alex Lifeson’s guitar tone is characterized by a crisp, clean sound with a touch of chorus and reverb. To get started with Guitar Rig, you’ll want to follow these steps:

  1. Amp Model: For this tone, you should look for a clean amp model with some headroom. Lifeson is known for using a mix of clean and slightly driven tones. In Guitar Rig, consider using the “Tweedman” or “Citrus” amp models. Both offer a good clean base tone.
  2. Amp Head and Cabinet: Pair your chosen amp model with a suitable cabinet simulation. Lifeson often used Marshall and Hughes & Kettner amps, so you could select a corresponding cabinet in Guitar Rig. The “Jazz 120” or “British Double” cabinets are good options.
  3. Reverb: Add a touch of reverb to give your guitar sound space and depth. Lifeson’s tone usually has a subtle reverb. In Guitar Rig, you can use the “Guitar Rig Pro Reverb” effect or experiment with other reverb presets.
  4. Chorus: Lifeson occasionally used chorus to thicken his tone. Add a gentle chorus effect to your signal chain. In Guitar Rig, try the “Chorus & Flanger” module or “Vintage Chorus” to dial in the right amount.
  5. EQ: Lifeson’s tone is well-balanced, so consider using a parametric EQ to make subtle adjustments. Boost the mids slightly and cut or boost the treble and bass as needed. Keep the adjustments modest to maintain clarity.
  6. Noise Gate: Use a noise gate to reduce unwanted noise, especially if you’re using any drive or distortion. Set it to a threshold where it only engages when you’re not playing.
  7. Compression: While not always present, a light compression can help even out your dynamics. Use the “Studio Compressor” in Guitar Rig or a similar plugin.
  8. Guitar: It’s worth mentioning that the guitar you use plays a significant role in achieving this tone. Alex Lifeson used a variety of guitars, but for “Freewill,” he used his famous, white Gibson ES-355. These semi-hollow body guitars contributed to his signature sound.

Remember that tweaking these settings will be necessary to get your tone as close as possible. Alex Lifeson’s tone evolved over the years, so it may also vary slightly from live performances to studio recordings. Use your ears as your best guide and make subtle adjustments until you achieve the desired result.

Some Sciencebase readers reached this page searching for “Alex Lifeson headrush rig”. Headrush is a FX pedalboard brand from inMusic Brands.

 

The Sciencebase musical Top Ten

The current Top Ten of my songs streamed from my BandCamp page

1 Ticking Clocks
2 No Footprints in the Sand
3 Easy come, easy go
4 Festival Friends (Cool as Folk)
5 No symphony for lovers
6 What we have become
7 The people we could be
8 Ebb and Flow
9 Dustbowl
10 Tideline

Ticking Clocks – A sort of sequel to “She’s Leaving Home”

No Footprints in the Sand – When there’s nobody on the beach

Easy come, easy go – Argument for argument’s sake, laid-back funk rock

Festival Friends (Cool as Folk) – Acoustic, fingerstyle instrumental

No symphony for lovers – The Synaesthesia Blues in a Paul Weller style

What we have become – Live studio, singer-songwriter melancholy

The people we could be – Songwriter reminiscences

Ebb and Flow – Singer-songwriter tidal musings

Dustbowl – A nice big slice of Americana

Tideline – Still a Northern Soul at heart

Interesting that the majority of the streams this month have been for the more melancholic singer-songwriter acoustic stuff. I do have quite an eclectic mix of styles across the last decade of recording and musical collaborations. Ten albums worth of my music. And, a triple-album collection of earlier songs here.

Dave Bradley’s Music

TL:DR – I have dozens of songs and instrumentals for you to download or stream through my BandCamp page right now.


Although, I’m probably best known as a professional science writer and an amateur wildlife photographer, when I’m not involved in those you might catch me singing and playing live with my band, C5 Website/Facebook, or in our community a choir (TyrannoChorus). You can hear my latest solo and collaborative recorded music on BandCamp and SoundCloud. Some of my stuff is on Spotify and iTunes too, including a few cover songs. As of 30th July 2023, Mrs Sciencebase and myself are also now veterans of the Cambridge Folk Festival having performed there live with a scratch choir organised and rehearsed by Ben and Dom.

Dave Bradley with a guitar in between songs at a pub gig with his band C5
Dave Bradley performing with C5 the band, photo by Clive Thomson. That’s lead guitarist Rich Blakesley blurred in the background.

I’ve always been in love with music, since my first baby rattle and toy guitar as a tot, been attempting to play guitar ever since. It is only in the last fifteen years or so that I have performed live in front of audiences and written and recorded my music, first with a community choir and then in a gigging band C5. I’ve sang at the Royal Albert Hall with a mass choir and recorded at Abbey Road Studios, ditto. Have also sung with The London Community Gospel Choir (twice) and with Pete Churchill’s London Vocal Project (twice). I’ve also taken part in a couple of choral workshops with classical composer John Rutter.

Proud to have played quite a few pubs, events, festivals, and party gigs with my band C5 and also alongside the inimitable Barbara Duckworth. Also to have had a few solo slots in front of audiences of a fair few hundred singing the lead on Billy Joel’s “The Longest Time” with the TyrannoChorus choir (led my Siobhan Lihoreau, with arranger and pianist Tim Lihoreau) the West Road Concert Hall in Cambridge and just before the 2020 lockdown singing “Be the Man” by The Young’uns for two charity events with the choir. I’m also occasionally called on to provide guitar accompaniment on songs we have done by Cat Stevens, Sting, Paul Weller, The Who, The Divine Comedy, The Traveling Wilburys, The Beatles, and others. Many of my original compositions can be found on my BandCamp page. I’ve performed a few of these live at various events and a mental health music festival.

This is a very short list of a few of the musicians, bands, and artists I admire in alphabetical order: Alan Parsons Project, Athlete, B52s, Badly Drawn Boy, The Beach Boys, The Beatles, Blondie, Blue Aeroplanes, Blur, David Bowie, Kate Bush, Camel, Glen Campbell, Phil Collins, Crowded House, The Cure, Paco de Lucia, John Denver, Al Di Meola, Thomas Dolby, Doves, Dr Dre, Duran Duran, Editors, Elbow, Fred’s House, Robert Fripp, Peter Gabriel, Genesis, Steve Hackett, Steve Hillage, Carole King, King Crimson, The Kinks, Led Zeppelin, Manic Street Preachers, Joni Mitchell, Van Morrison, Mike Oldfield, Pavlov’s Dog, Placebo, Porcupine Tree, Radiohead, Gerry Rafferty, R.E.M, Nile Rodgers, Rush, Seals & Crofts, Siouxsie and The Banshees, Squeeze, Steely Dan, Supertramp, Andy Summers, Talking Heads, James Taylor, Tears for Fears, U2, Franki Valli, The Willows, Yes, Neil Young, there are many others.

I’ve been told that I occasionally sound like a Geordie Glenn Tilbrook (that’s according to Dek “Mono Stone” Ham), and sometimes George Harrison, Steely Dan, Stephen Duffy, Peter Gabriel, early Oasis, Phil Collins, Alan Parsons Project, Sting, James Taylor, James, Echo & The Bunnymen, U2, David Bowie (most often, admittedly), and Stephen Stills, and most recently, Cat Stevens, Neil Finn (Crowded House), the latter on the basis of my charity single “Bridges crossed and burned“, and even Elton John, although I think that was only really about the piano loops I’d used on my Meat Loaf pastiche – Fake it Till You Make it by Malt Loaf.

I couldn’t claim to have even an ounce of the talent of any of those people, but I do reckon I’ve finally developed my own sound now. And, more to the point, I don’t wear my influences quite so prominently on my silk kimono sleeves as with many of my earlier songs, although there are almost always allusions to those inspirational musicians in there some
where.

Mastodon

Reboot of my original music page from way back when…my earlier songs from my CCC Arts Night era can be found on the newly branded Sciencebase BandCamp page here.

Cambridge Folk Festival 2023

Lady Blackbird
Lady Blackbird

Mrs Sciencebase and myself once again headed for Cherry Hinton Hall for this year’s Cambridge Folk Festival (27-30 July 2023). This time around, I didn’t take any camera equipment other than my phone. Still ended up taking almost 300 photos and videos nevertheless…I’ve put the photos in a video montage with a piece of incidental music I wrote and recorded once we got home, inspired by the festival and a guitar workshop with Nigel Wearne (pictured below). The tune Festival Friends, is also now available to stream or download from my BandCamp page as part of my Four Missing Keys EP.

Tent
Home from home at Cherry Hinton Hall
Grand Entrance
Grand Entrance to Cambridge Folk Festival 2023
Festival Wristband
The obligatory festival wristband
Stage 2 audience, first night
Stage 2 audience, first night
Camping kettle courtesy of Liz
Camping kettle courtesy of Liz
Essentials
Day two essentials
Guitar workshop with Aussie Nigel Wearne
Guitar workshop with Aussie Nigel Wearne
Audience member red boots
Audience member red boots
Audience member bag
Audience member bag
Random hat
Random hat
Lady Blackbird
Lady Blackbird
Lady Blackbird
Lady Blackbird
Flyte
Flyte
Julian Taylor
Julian Taylor
Folk Festival crowd
Folk Festival crowd
Braebach
Braebach
Kate Rusby
Kate Rusby
Sorry, don't know this band's name
The Smith and Brewer Band
Baskery
Baskery
Niteworks
Niteworks
Niteworks pipes
Niteworks pipes
Cool as Folk pick courtesy of Adam
Cool as Folk pick courtesy of Adam
Festival Choir audience at our performance
Festival Choir audience at our performance
Sons of Town Hall - aka George Ulysses Brown (Ben Parker Jr) Josiah Chester Jones (David Berkeley)
Sons of Town Hall
Josiah Chester Jones aka David Berkeley
“Josiah Chester Jones”
Le Vent du Nord
Le Vent du Nord
Setting up for Imelda May
Setting up for Imelda May
Imelda May prior to changing into hand-painted Sinead O'Connor vest
Imelda May prior to changing into hand-painted Sinead O’Connor vest
Ferris + Sylvester
Ferris + Sylvester
Folkies
Folkies
Leafy shadows, stage 2
Leafy shadows, stage 2
Festival scratch choir rehearsal
Festival scratch choir rehearsal
Stornoway clashed with The Proclaimers
Stornoway clashed with The Proclaimers
The Proclaimers, headlining Friday night
The Proclaimers, headlining Friday night
More audience
More audience
Eliza Carthy and the Restitution
Eliza Carthy and the Restitution
Mrs Sciencebase in my cowboy hat towards end of Imelda May set
Mrs Sciencebase in my cowboy hat – last night
Half the packing
Half the packing

We enjoyed the following acts Gnoss, Flyte, Symbio, Ibibio Sound Machine, Nigel Wearne (on stage and for me a guitar workshop), Lady Blackbird (massively who finished hiser set with a tribute to Tina Turner in the form of River Deep, Mountain High and Proud Mary), Folk Camps Party Band with caller Fee Lock, The Longest Johns (quite a tame Wellerman rendition it has to be said, Stornoway (in favour of the second half of The Proclaimers’ set, they do a version of The Only Way is Up on which the intro to our band C5’s arrangement is loosely based), Kate Rusby (very funny), (un peu de) Le Vent du Nord, Niteworks (incredible Celtic EDM with pipes, a little bit of Rufus Wainright, some Arrested Development, Judy Collins, the fantastic Ferris + Sylvester, a spot of Breabach, William Prince, Oi Va Voi, Elephant Sessions, Angélique Kidjo (who did some great Talking Heads covers), Imelda May who did a stunning tribute to her late friend Sinead O’Connor in Nothing Compares 2U.

There were others that we ducked in and out of on various stages…Baskery, Son of Town Hall etc…you can’t get to see everyone and it always feels like you’ve missed out when you hear back from friends who were audience at one stage when you were at another, but all in a lovely weekend again.

One of the highlights for us was that we joined the Festival Choir with Ben and Dom and got to perform a 30-minute set Sunday, on Stage 3 (actually the choir was too big for the stage, so we were in front of it), but we went down well with a captive audience keeping out of the Sunday rain!

Lots of Horsechestnut Leaf Miner swarming the Horse Chestnut under which we camped
Lots of Horsechestnut Leaf Miner swarming the Horse Chestnut under which we camped…you knew there’d be moths, surely?
Take it easy
Take it easy
Is it on the trolley?
Is it on the trolley?
Cuppa?
Cuppa?

Festival Friends added to Four Missing Keys EP

I wrote an instrumental inspired by attending the Cambridge Folk Festival at the end of July and not only taking in a lot of great acts, but taking part in a Nigel Wearne guitar workshop and performing with the Festival Choir.

UPDATE: 3 Aug 2023 – Nigel had a listen via my Insta and had this to say, which is very kind of him:

“Beautiful! So glad you put that tuning to great use. Fantastic playing!”

The track is called Festival Friends and is the incidental music to my video montage from the festival. The final mix is also now part of my Four Missing Keys EP, which was originally a triple A-side of three songs, written September 2022, January this year, and then March. The latest tune uses open-G tuning, the sound of which you might recognise from various artists and songs, not least the Rolling Stones (see Classic Chord #20).

Four tracks written and recorded during late 2022 and 2023, quotes are from listeners:

Festival Friends (Cool as Folk) is an acoustic guitar instrumental in open-G tuning inspired by the Cambridge Folk Festival.

“A gorgeous little instrumental”

Ticking Clocks – A simple jazz-rock fusion track was recorded in January 2023 with C5 drummer Adam Stewart on percussion and synths

Take the Waters – Gentle post-covid singer-songwriter vulnerability.

“Take the Waters wouldn’t be out of place on the Neil Young album Harvest”

“Gorgeous, vulnerable vocals. Great harmonies. Lovely acoustic guitar solos.”

Old Nick is Quick – Quick quasi-new-wave Americana. Wine is fine but whiskey’s thicker. Written and recorded in March 2023.

ChatGPT: Your personal brand manager

TL:DR – I prompted ChatGPT to write me a personal brand pitch.

I haven’t mentioned ChatGPT for a while. There has been something of a backlash against the hype and the scaremongering. But, I have still been using it for various small jobs, such as quick website tweaks and summarising documents that are TL:DR (too long, didn’t read). Latest prompt I gave it was to act as my personal brand manager and write me a pitch based on the Sciencebase homepage. This is an edited version of what it came up with:

David Bradley Science Writer

As a multi-award-winning freelance science writer with over three decades of experience, David Bradley has a unique talent for making complex scientific concepts accessible and engaging. He has written for a diverse range of outlets, including countless newspapers, magazines, research, industrial, educational, and academic organizations, and websites, covering a wide range of topics from astronomy to zoology and almost everything in between.

As a wannabe polymath, he is also an accomplished musician with an enormous passion for photography. He combines his science, snaps, and songs to create a website and blog that offers a fresh perspective on the natural world, showcasing his stunning wildlife photography, and sharing the latest cutting-edge research as well as occasionally offering incidental music. With his wife, Mrs Sciencebase, he is a keen allotmenteer, wildlife garden pond manager, and garden rewilding enthusiast.

David’s writing style is approachable and engaging, and he loves to sprinkle a little Geordie wit and charm into his work. He has bylines in New Scientist, Science, Nature, The Guardian, The Daily Telegraph, Popular Science, American Scientist, and many others. In 1995, he set up the first-ever chemistry webzine, which morphed into the Sciencebase site in 1999.

If you’re looking for an experienced freelance science writer with a passion for making complex concepts accessible, look no further than David Bradley. Connect with him on social media, or shoot him an email at [email protected] to start a conversation…

How to sing

TL:DR – Some tips on singing from the vocal jazz maestro Pete Churchill.


Years ago, I and a bunch of singing friends did a couple of vocal technique workshops with jazz maestro Pete Churchill. He had lots of words of wisdom to dispense. I put together a cribsheet for our choir and for anyone else who might have a need for singing tips:

Get into the groove, feel the beat, get with the swing, get off the page! [No looking down at scores (and if you really must, not highlighting pens!), watch the musical director and keep an eye for the audience].

Understand the “form” (structure) of the song, don’t count bars, feel the rhythm, and know where the repeats and codas fit

Be aware of what the other singers and musicians are doing, from the top sops and right to the bottom bass via the altos and tenors, if you lose your place you can always revert to the main melody

Be aware of your breath, use your breath, it’s part of your voice, especially in folk/jazz/pop/rock singing as opposed to classical singing, but especially Pete’s type of jazz singing

Use the percussive plosives, the buh, pah, bah sounds for expressive emphasis, but obviously not on every b and p, give your singing dynamics

You can hold the consonants not just the vowels, make them rich, “Fall in Llllllove” sometimes, don’t “Fall in Luuuuuv” every time. This is more of a jazz nuance, but useful to have in the back of your mind for bluesier/jazzier songs

Start your oohs and aahs with a hushed “h” (h)oooooh, (h)aaaaah to protect your voice from hard ah, eh, ooh sounds that clack your vocal folds (cords), this applies to the starts of lines not only to the harmony ooooohs

You can hold vowel notes a little longer by changing the vowel sound as your breath expires, it does work, although I reckon it’s partly psychological but possibly just changes breath rate enough to give you extra time, it also sometimes leads to a bit of vibrato which helps you to sustain a note too because the vibrato, or is it tremolo, is putting in extra energy

Feel and learn the sounds with your mouth, this is an ongoing thing for learning any song…and ties in with the following in terms of expressiveness and knowing a song better

Here’s the non-vocal bonus tip from Pete:

Your eyebrows can transmit emotion to your audience, facial expressions hinge on the eyebrows and you can get away with a bit of exaggeration when singing to engage the audience in the song people expect emotion from singers not deadpan stares, so go for it


We’d all done a couple of classical singing workshops with John Rutter, prior to the Pete Churchill jazz workshops, and some of us had done some classical recording with Karl Jenkins at Abbey Road Studios, as well as sung one of his choral works at the Royal Albert Hall. There were numerous singing tips from those happenings too, they were commonly about dynamics, not looking down, lifting one’s chin to allow a low not to resonate, and other such matters.

During covid lockdown when we couldn’t sing together, we had a chance to chat to various composers and performers on Zoom with our choir, including Mike Batt (The Wombles), Aled Jones (The Snowman hit), Phil Coulter (composer of Puppet on a String), Howard Goodall (choral composer and lots of TV themes, such as Blackadder, QI, Red Dwarf, and the Not the Nine o’Clock News comedy songs), Thomas Hewitt Jones (composer perhaps best (not) known for Silly Song on social media) , and Eric Whitacre (Seal Lullaby etc).

Whitactre had a great tip regarding vocal warmups. He suggested that instead of doing the usual doh-rae-me exercises and arpeggios and stuff, that singers should all just immediately jump into the song they’re hoping to perform. Not full blast from the top, gently, everyone just chugging along on the melody and maybe heading for their harmony parts, but warming up, like gentle jogging before a proper run.

I hope I do utilise some of these experiences and vocal techniques and singing tips in my own live performances with the TyrannoChorus and bigMouth choirs, with my band, C5, and when I perform solo.

New way for a new wave song

TL:DR -Newspaper story inspired me to write a post-punk folk song telling the tale. I rewrote the lyrics the next day. Download/stream here.


As you may have noticed I wrote about the news story concerning the so-called brain-eating amoeba. I also felt the tragic tale deserved a modern, post-punk, folk song as a lament and so I pulled one together in on an otherwise dull morning. Later that evening, I had second thoughts about the original lyrics and rewrote them entirely the following wet morning. The original song became Old Nick is Quick

Artwork my Old Nick is Quick song, generated with MidJourney and modified. Shows a guy in a big hat drinking at a bar outdoors in the desert, with a blurred building or vehicle giving off smoke behind him

Old Nick is Quick

I woke up today
As you might have easily guessed
There’s one thing I must say
You might be less than impressed

I read in the news
There was a man with the answers
For shaking off the blues
With a shot he took his chances

He made a pact with a bottle
One more drink, he’s on his way
But, he had forgotten
The liquor’s quick and it made him stay

The girl she had a message
It was hidden in her underwear
The punter paid his money first
And took her in the chair

She shivered at the thought of it
His weapon in her face
Sadly, so the story goes there is no other place

She made a deal with her ego
One more trick, she’s on her way
But, he’s no amigo
The money’s quick and it makes her stay

I woke up this morning
As you might have easily guessed
There’s one thing that I’ve got to say
Aren’t you just a little impressed?

They made a deal off the level
One more trick, they’re on their way
But, they were bedevilled
Old Nick is quick and he makes them stay

To take them away


You can stream or download my new song for free from BandCamp here.

As you have noticed, I used MidJourney to create some artwork although it’s very much modified from the software’s output.

Here are some of the other images my prompts about someone with a hat drinking at an outdoor bar in the desert generated. The prompt was something along the lines of: “A photographically realistic image in the style of album cover designers Hipgnosis. A man sat at a dusty bar in the open air in the desert. There is a bottle on the bar next to a wide-brimmed hat. He holds a glass of whisky in one hand. Also on the bar is an ashtray with a cigarette. The smoke from the cigarette rises up hundreds of feet.
On the horizon is a distant bridge that looks like the Devil’s Gate bridge. He is not a cowboy. No words.” MidJourney was quite free with how it interpreted my prompt, wouldn’t you say?

 

Old Nick generated by MidJourney

Old Nick generated by MidJourney

Old Nick generated by MidJourney

Brain-eating amoeba – the song

TL:DR – I wrote a song about a tragic tale in the news.


A contact on Mastodon read my post about the tragic tale of a Florida man who died from the so-called brain-eating amoeba. My contact thought the story or maybe just the headline sounded like a whimsical song from a band called The Chrysanthemums, Gloucestershire Is Just an Illusion. Althought I’d never heard of the band, I felt inspired and threw together some lyrics and recorded a little a capella lament. Poor fella.

Brain-eating amoeba

I woke up today
As you might have easily guessed
There’s one thing I must say
You might be a little impressed

I read in the news
There was a man out in Florida
Who liked to wash his nose
But, he didn’t bank on Naegleria

He caught a brain-eating amoeba
From the water in his neti pot
His hygiene wasn’t dry clean
Now the worms are dealing with his snot

He’d squirt water up each nostril
From a 6-inch length of hose
An amoeba wormed its way right in
And began to eat his nose

It slithered through his sinuses
And right into his brain
Sadly, so the story goes he was never the same again

He caught a brain-eating amoeba
From the water in his neti pot
His hygiene wasn’t dry clean
Now the worms are dealing with his snot

I woke up this morning
As you might have easily guessed
There’s one thing I got to say
Aren’t you just a little impressed?

My contact liked the vocal demo:

“Ah wow!! This is brilliant. I love it. See, tabloid headlines do, once in a blue moon, beget good songs. That’ll kill with a bit of angular guitar…sounded a bit like Yukio Yung/Terry Burrows”

So, I did some angular guitar, a new vocal, some drums (badly played on a MIDI keyboard), and some boxy bass…I might listen to Yukio Yung and The Chrysanthemums later.

 

You can still hear the original, rough and ready one-take vocal demo here

NB No intelligence, artificial or otherwise, was used in the writing and recording of this song.

Ticking clocks

TL:DR – My songwriting process for a recent composition entitled Ticking Clocks. Stream or download it here.


About a week ago, I mentioned that I was putting together a new song. I’d recorded a so-called 1+1 demo (just me singing with Martin guitar). But, earlier this week I hooked up with Adam, the drummer from my band, and we worked on the arrangement in his ad hoc studio with me on Taylor guitar (DI, direct injection, into the desk, U-phoria UMC404HD) and he on drums (electronic drums with an acoustic kit setting, also DI into my desk).

Once we had things just about right and had recorded a decent take of the drums and guitar, Adam added some nice retro 70s synth (the synth sound is called “Chick Corea”). I then returned to my home “studio” to record vocals (MXR mic), to add some electric guitar (Ibanez RG, EQ’d to a jazzy tone), Yamaha bass, and even a bit of tuned percussion in the form of MIDI glockenspiel played on my Akai keyboard (MPK mini).

I then mixed down the multiple tracks into the final song using one of the less well-known, but just as good digital audio workstations (DAWs), Acoustica Mixcraft. There’s really no need to break the bank on Pro Tools, Logic or whatever at this level. After all, most of the heavy lifting is done by the VST (virtual studio technology) plugins that even the professionals use in their pricey software. Mixcraft is basically GarageBand for Windows.

I then worked up a photo of a broken clock taken by Adam to create this montage with the title of the song and our names. Oh, and I recorded the ticking of a working clock for the very end of the track.

Artwork for Ticking Clocks song showing a clock with broken hands

Lyrically, I am still thinking this is about the young woman in The Beatles’ song She’s Leaving Home. We never knew for sure why she left, but it seems there were issues. My song is almost a sequel to that song and perhaps we can imagine she is called Luka, as in the Suzanne Vega song, perhaps even the suitcase in my song is the very same suitcase that was ‘pulled from under the bed’ in the Squeeze song Another Nail in my Heart. Now she’s back at her childhood home and they are gone. However, you take it, The Beatles, Suzanne Vega, Squeeze and perhaps (as Adam pointed out) even The Style Council were influences on the final song, and a touch of Rush with the intro, I confess.

Ticking Clocks

The key turns in the lock
she pushed the door wide open
with her suitcase. It’s a shock
to find herself back here once again

She locked the secrets deep inside
Unanswered prayers her woe betide

She finds the clocks
They stopped the day she stepped away
From the cruellest of hard knocks
and all the fear that it revealed

The silent screams, the sound that mocks
Those echoes drowned by ticking clocks

No need to knock
She grasps the letters from the floor
You know she’s taking stock
And gasps to know the secrets
they don’t hold her any more

The key’s inside the box.
She didn’t need to worry
About secrets locked up deep inside
Unanswered prayers her woe betide

She winds the clocks
And knows the secrets they can’t hold her
The cruellest of hard knocks
and all the fears that they concealed

She locked the secrets deep inside
Unanswered prayers her woe betide

She faced the shocks
And knows the secrets they can’t hold her
The hardest of hard knocks
And all her fears now gone forever

The latest iteration of my song Ticking Clocks is available to stream for free on BandCamp, or name your price and you can download it.

You will hopefully listen all the way through and hear the proggie addition of a ticking clock at the end that has a growing reverb bloom and pans away from centre…well, a friend mentioned that he liked that addition to the song and assumed it was some grand long-case clock. Unfortunately, the reality of my home studio is much more mundane…

This screengrab shows the tools I used to make the clock sound much better: Compression and Reverb:

I had tried to use ChatGPT to help with the lyrics and the title, but none of its suggestions worked in any way. I also used MidJourney AI to generate some poignant artwork, but none of that really fit either. Top left works best, top-right spoiled by hovering suitcase, bottom-left too old, bottom-right too young.

None of the versions in this generation work, although bottom left could inspire another iteration, where the girl is standing looking into the house and its raining indoors!